Comments on: final project – round two

By: crichards

crichards — Tue, 29 Apr 2008 00:41:05 +0000

I also like the two in the top right corner. I think they work more effectively when you don’t have to have them against a box–they feel more like a “logo” to me. And both work the “hot” into the word really nicely, too, so it is a bit more subtle than your previous versions, which for me is a good thing.

By: mia2008

mia2008 — Mon, 21 Apr 2008 01:37:20 +0000

I really like these new designs. I like the ones that have that swirl completely in the rectangle the best. Also, for the middle rectangular one(on the right), I would maybe try and make the swirl slightly more opaque?? Just a tiny little bit (not as much as the one underneath it). The fonts are starting to get a bit lost in it. The swirl actually reminds me of steam more than swirly chocolate but I think thats perfectly appropriate too.

By: Neil

Neil — Sat, 19 Apr 2008 16:00:34 +0000

I really love what you did with the second down on the right. The letters h o t are spaced perfectly for something like that, and I like that you went light with h-o-t. That seems like the direction I’d go with it. I also like the bottom right, but it’s not as simple and efficient as the other one.
Great job!!